Collaboration project peer comments and self assessments
Peer editing:
1. Sometimes the characters are partially under the light. Maybe work on the lighting more. The lighting could be used to highlight what important things are going to happen. But the light they alredubahev is nice too because it outlines and highlights the whole stage.
2. Characters could maybe focus on more what is in their head and what they really want to say.
3. The plots are very interesting. Maybe a little bit more connection between the scenes to make the whole show flow better?
4. Sometimes characters turn their back on the audience. Maybe find out where the audience should be to get the best look of the scenes.
5. Really lovely physical and facial expressions. Good job. And Nice story line! It is interesting and the audience would want to know what has actually happened and what is going to happen next.
6. Maybe incorporate some props to make the scenes’ content look richer and help the audience to understand the scenes better.
Self-assessment:
1. We did a good job at setting the theme of our play, creating the characters, making up plots, and connecting the end of the play with the thesis of the play, “Love Is Complicated”.
2. Our motif is quite explicitly explained and our first impression on the painting, which is our motif, is well explained as well.
3.We did a good job at imagining things that happens with adults, who are people we are not familiar with since we are teenagers. And it is difficult for us to come up with what is happening in the world of adults and what the adults think.
4. Although we do have goals and plans for lighting and stage arranging, some places are not specific and well planned out enough.
5. Some scenes and plots just do not work. For example the scene we have had which is when Marcus brought Sara, who is his mistress, into the bar where his wife Netali works.
1. Sometimes the characters are partially under the light. Maybe work on the lighting more. The lighting could be used to highlight what important things are going to happen. But the light they alredubahev is nice too because it outlines and highlights the whole stage.
2. Characters could maybe focus on more what is in their head and what they really want to say.
3. The plots are very interesting. Maybe a little bit more connection between the scenes to make the whole show flow better?
4. Sometimes characters turn their back on the audience. Maybe find out where the audience should be to get the best look of the scenes.
5. Really lovely physical and facial expressions. Good job. And Nice story line! It is interesting and the audience would want to know what has actually happened and what is going to happen next.
6. Maybe incorporate some props to make the scenes’ content look richer and help the audience to understand the scenes better.
Self-assessment:
1. We did a good job at setting the theme of our play, creating the characters, making up plots, and connecting the end of the play with the thesis of the play, “Love Is Complicated”.
2. Our motif is quite explicitly explained and our first impression on the painting, which is our motif, is well explained as well.
3.We did a good job at imagining things that happens with adults, who are people we are not familiar with since we are teenagers. And it is difficult for us to come up with what is happening in the world of adults and what the adults think.
4. Although we do have goals and plans for lighting and stage arranging, some places are not specific and well planned out enough.
5. Some scenes and plots just do not work. For example the scene we have had which is when Marcus brought Sara, who is his mistress, into the bar where his wife Netali works.
Comments
Post a Comment