In class writing (updated)
In-class writing:
What do you intend to set as your intention(s)?
Base on my plots of my scene, I want to express a central message: whereas a temporary and overwhelming crush can be very attractive and strong in someways, but people are all controlled or ruled over by their dark side of morality and their fates. For example, whereas the baker's wife and the prince really had an affair in the woods, there were still parted by their own destinies: the prince need to find Cinderella and slaughter the giant, and the baker's wife need to find the things for her son. And why they had an crush on each other is not they really fell in love but for their own desire of wealth and lust. The Prince liked the Baker's wife because of lust and loneliness; and the baker's wife had an affair with the Prince because she thought she could use him to be her fate to wealth and thus a much better life.
What do you hope the impact(s) on the audience will be?
I want the audience to come to my theater thinking that they are just watching a fairytale, but when they leave I want them to actually bring some reality about the actual world when they leave. For instance, although In To The Woods is just a fictional story and all the characters in the text are fictional too, specifically my own piece will reveal to the audience the truth of momentary love and crush are just as easy to fade away as bubbles in real life.Like I have said in my proposal, “I even want to set myself as a puppet like figure on the stage. This is to refer to Brecht’s intention of showing his audience that everyhing is fake: the story, the narrator, the characters, and the costumes. Also, this is for expressing another message of my own that, whereas a temporary and overwhelming crush can be very attractive and strong in someways, but people are all controlled or ruled over by their dark side of morality and their fates.” I want the audience to feel how weak and small love and fascination are in front of fate and death. And also another moral lesson that people's selfishness and desire are sometimes stronger than love.
How might you assess the efficacy of that in the talkback (what questions can you ask, etc.)?
Ask my audience what do they think the message(s) of the piece is(are). What are are you confused about this piece? Do you think there is absolutely true love? What do you think my piece's argument about love is? Do you agree with the central message of this piece? If not, why? ...
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